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Monday
Mar082010

Good Writing Makes For...

I thought I'd start this Monday morning off with a tidbit of both writing whimsy and food for thought.

courtesy of INDEXED (thisisindexed.com)

I think you can read this one of two ways:

  1. The better the writing, the better the read.
  2. The more you read, the better you write.

One of my English professors in college always said that if you wanted to ever be a writer you had to READ EVERYTHING. Read constantly. Fill your head with words, because the more you read, the more you know how to use them. The more ingrained the ebb and flow and structure and grammar of the English language seeps into your brain.

Even just the repeated viewing of printed words on the page teaches you what your written words should look like. And I think a few glimpses into the query pile would show you some examples where it's clear people aren't quite familiar with the basic LOOK of prose, let alone it's finer nuances.

So what do you think? And what are you reading these days?

Tuesday
May192009

Tortured Trilogies

I posed a question to the Twittersphere yesterday in the late afternoon/early evening:

elanaroth: I would love to know precisely WHY all fantasy novels come as trilogies (at least as far as my queries go)? "Just because" won't cut it.

This was prompted after I received yet another query for another first novel in a planned fantasy trilogy. A first novel where the word count was 100,000+ and you knew it'd be similar for the second and third installments. I really wanted to know why this is so necessary. And of course I got a flurry of responses both supporting and explaining this trend and also criticizing it. So I figured I'd elaborate, weave them together, and wax philosophic. And of course lecture you about crafting story.

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Wednesday
May062009

A Word About Formula

I had a follow-up thought to my post on Monday about NEWNESS. So consider this a companion-post. This thought occurred to me as I was watching probably my third episode of NCIS in a row on USA. This has turned into a weird habit of mine lately, probably because it's easy to have on in the background, but mostly because it's nice to know what to expect sometimes. So here's the thought:

Formulas are not a bad thing. Formulas in fiction can and should work.

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Sunday
May032009

Getting Your Hands Greasy

by Eli Stutz

I never guessed that fiction writing could turn me into an overnight kitchen hero. I'm usually the one who does the dishes, not the cooking, but since my middle grade novels center around cuisine, I've now racked up two culinary adventures of my own. Last summer, while penning Pickle Impossible (where two children from rival pickle families race across Europe to win a pickle contest), I decided that in order to really understand the subject matter, I'd need to make my own pickles. 

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Friday
Oct242008

Defining High-Concept

If you start looking for what I want in a book, every listing should hopefully the same thing: high-concept. Whatever the project, I want it to be high-concept. Middle-grade fiction? High-concept. YA? High-concept. Narrative non-fiction? I even want that high-concept. (Trust me, it works.) But what does that mean? The question came up at the Rutgers conference last weekend. And looking at a lot of the queries I get, most are not high-concept pitches, in spite of what I ask for all over the intarweb. So, it's becoming clearer that this might not be so...well...clear. Most people probably think it's like Justice Potter Stewart's famous line about not being able to define pornography, but that, "I know it when I see it." Luckily, high-concept has a definition: it's a term used to refer to something you can sum up and pitch in a sentence.  It's a very Hollywood term, and it's easier to find examples in movies. Like Star Wars ("epic good v. evil battle...in outer-space"), Jaws ("man-eating shark terrorizes coast"), and even The 40-Year-Old Virgin (self-explanatory). I like high-concept projects because they are easy for me to pick out, and easy for me to pitch. I can visualize it, an editor can visualize, the sales team can visualize it, and most importantly the buyer can visualize it. You can see right away that it's something new, or at the very least a fresh spin on an old story. So, high-concept is often closely linked to commercial hook. Because it's something so concise to pitch, it's easy to see how a wide audience might take to it. But the pitch has to work and make sense. For example, if you sent me a query for your novel and said, "it's Lord of the Rings meets the Care Bears," I'd have no idea what that would look like, or why anyone would want to see that. But if you said "it's set in the future, where everyone gets mandatory plastic surgery at age 16 to become beautiful", well, I'd say that's awesome, and continue to feel sad that someone else found that first. The other trick is making sure the writing lives up to the concept. I've read projects where the pitch was killer, but the writing didn't match up--and I was left disappointed. While it's true that a little extra allowance is given to high-concept projects in terms of the level of writing, at the end of the day the words on the page have to do the story justice. They don't have to be the most eloquent, literary, exquisitely crafted gems (hell, think about the dialogue in the Star Wars movies), but you have to tell your story compellingly.  So, did that answer the question? If not, leave your thoughts below. And then send me your high-concept pitches.